LAYOUT 1 : Great job. The fact that you went out of your way to take the photos and mapped the logo onto the bag was excellent. Your choice of type gives us a feeling of army and that works in juxtaposition with the Chick kit. This is a very persuasive argument. Bag is sitting in front and highlighted so gains the most important piece of information. LAYOUT 2: The tank references the army and reinforces the notion that the bag is for a chick who wants to be armed. Perhaps the tank could have been a little lighter. Eventually you will work out the difference between the light on the screen and your printer. Just do some test runs printing or go to the same printer every time. Great directional lines within the tank. LAYOUT 3: the bag is excellent and the fact that you even corrected the shadow on the dress is impressive. I do agree that the model needs to be a bit smaller but what really bothered me was the horizon line behind her head. IDEA / Slogan: This is a cohesive campaign that you followed through with great alacrity, thank you.
LAYOUT 1 : Great job. The fact that you went out of your way to take the photos and mapped the logo onto the bag was excellent. Your choice of type gives us a feeling of army and that works in juxtaposition with the Chick kit. This is a very persuasive argument. Bag is sitting in front and highlighted so gains the most important piece of information.
ReplyDeleteLAYOUT 2: The tank references the army and reinforces the notion that the bag is for a chick who wants to be armed. Perhaps the tank could have been a little lighter. Eventually you will work out the difference between the light on the screen and your printer. Just do some test runs printing or go to the same printer every time. Great directional lines within the tank.
LAYOUT 3: the bag is excellent and the fact that you even corrected the shadow on the dress is impressive. I do agree that the model needs to be a bit smaller but what really bothered me was the horizon line behind her head.
IDEA / Slogan: This is a cohesive campaign that you followed through with great alacrity, thank you.