This is my final draft of my redesigned bad ad. It came out better than I thought, and was surprised how hard it was since it's such a small ad (2 inches x 2 inches). I had to print a few times to make sure the font was big enough.
This is a great beginning. You have cleaned up the original and managed to really organize the information. I like the use of the text down the side, but feel the address etc down the bottom could have had more contrast – perhaps a white section with black type. I a not sure about the text on the side of the face – whether it is the spacing or the fact the type comes off the face or the spacing between the lines.
This is a great beginning. You have cleaned up the original and managed to really organize the information. I like the use of the text down the side, but feel the address etc down the bottom could have had more contrast – perhaps a white section with black type. I a not sure about the text on the side of the face – whether it is the spacing or the fact the type comes off the face or the spacing between the lines.
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